Ohhhhhhhh yes.I've thought about for some time, and I think I finally understand what it is you're trying to tell me.
What I considered the climax is what you considered the build-up to a climax.
In this light, I can see how the end can be a little underwhelming. However, you should know that this was for a school project, and since I tend to procrastinate, I had to stay up until two o'clock the night before the presentation to write and composes the last three minutes of the entire song.
Since I kind of rushed it, I didn't think about proper climaxes (I just wanted to finish the damn thing ). However, if I had more time, I might have made a more refined ending, because I think your counsel is most sound in this regard.
Oh, well, right?
In any case, I will be updating this thread at my own leisure, so expect an update when you least expect it...
I highly understand the nature of procrastination until 2 am. xD Although my New Year's resolution had been to cut back on the procrastinating, my Junior Year of high school was my absolute worst year... I almost failed an essay because I waited until the last second and then fell asleep before I could finish. xD
So yes! I can completely understand how the ending was the way it was, taking that into account. xD
I'll be waiting...
^ GUESS WHICH ONE IS WHICH. Just guess. ^