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    “Activate Reconnaissance Protocol

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    Time at 8:00:00 PM AST on 12/07/10

    [Priority code 3141]”



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    Prologue: Midway Point


    All was silent on Benson Street save for the rhythmic squealing of the rickety shopping cart as Old Roger steered it along, his head buried in his worn and shoddy coat. The sky had been grey all day, and the cold wind was making his aging joints ache. But in spite of having to deal with the dreadful weather, he deemed it to have been a successful day’s work; he happened upon many interesting items while rummaging around in the neighboring dumps and alleyways, many of which now filled his cart.


    An overpass loomed up ahead as Old Roger advanced at a slow pace. Fellow vagabonds saluted him as he passed by, and he waved back with sincerity. He was a recognizable face in the Brooklyn area, especially among the homeless, as he had a knack for finding invaluable items for the harshness of life on the streets. They would often come to him to trade for food or clothing, much to Old Roger’s benefit; he was able to eke out a meager existence in this way, and it suited him just fine.


    He turned his cart as the overpass came and descended the small, steep hill, struggling to keep control of his cart and his belongings as the load tried to pull him downwards. Once at the bottom, he pushed his cart beside a dirty looking mattress and settled down on it to rest his weary legs. The underside of the pass was his most recent dwelling place, one that he thought to be quite cozy, for it shielded him from the rain and the wind, and people seldom came down there to bother him.


    Once he retrieved his strength, he got a fire going in the nearby rusted barrel and began to sort through his hoard of objects and trinkets. A pair of mismatched shoes, a portion of blue tarp, a half-empty bottle of shampoo; it was all excellent by a beggar’s standards. After he divided the lot into things he would trade and things he would keep, he rewarded himself by breaking out a bottle of whiskey and began to drink his all of his worries away.


    Old Roger had been living on the streets of New York for many years. He was getting old now, his age showing in the grey hairs of his unkempt beard and long matted hair that seemed to grow from the edges of his bean hat. He only vaguely recalled his name; people have been calling him Old Roger for longer than he cared to remember. As the night went on and the liquor gradually took its soothing effects, he began to forget his loneliness and his past regrets in life.


    He had a strong buzz going after the midway point of his bottle, and as he stared out into the distance, sitting on the ground with arms propped against the mattress, he had the vague sensation that something was moving in the air. He paid little attention at first, but soon the rippling of the air caught his drunken attention. A sudden gust of wind extinguished his fire. The buzzing noise swelled; his body rang with a nauseating vibration. Then a high pitched ring filled his ears, a painful sound that drowned out everything else, and as he sat still, paralyzed with fear, he began to see faint objects taking form. The ground began to crack beneath the fluttering shadows, now vague humanoid silhouettes that struggled to keep their shapes.


    Then to Old Roger’s astonishment, four men dropped from thin air, crashing down on the earth with a thud as though they had been suddenly snapped into existence. The old man retreated back on his mattress in panic. The men, clad in beige long-coats and black tuques, appeared to be in pain, gasping heavily, as if the very air was poisonous. They fumbled in their coats, and took out syringes filled with a reddish liquid, which they promptly injected themselves with. They all appeared relieved after the shot, and they lingered on the ground for a moment before standing up with dazed expressions. One of them took out a cell phone and made a call while the others came to their senses.


    “Alright, listen up”, said the cell phone man. “We’re heading out to the NWG outpost in the Westside. Our boys will be waiting for us there. Let’s take the H-Rods and get the hell out of here.”


    They moved to pick up three small metal rods that stuck up from the ground, which were arranged in a triangular pattern around the area in which they stood.
    Those rods sure as hell weren’t there yesterday, Old Roger thought to himself. And as the unit began to move out, one of the four, a grim looking man who held a cigarette in his mouth, glanced over in the beggar’s direction, and halted. The others noticed, and they too stopped to look over where haggard Old Roger sat. The four men stared at the old man with menacing eyes.

    Then the cell phone man walked forward, and reached in his long-coat, only to pull out a pistol; it was nothing like Old Roger had ever seen. It was very sleek, and had a peculiar, almost otherworldly design. The man stopped and aimed it directly in Old Roger’s direction. The wide-eyed vagabond stood up at the s
    ight, arms outstretched in an effort to ward them off.

    “Please, d-don't shoot me!" he pleaded. "Stay away from me!"

    The man stood motionless, weapon at the ready, when his cigarette-smoking associate moved forward and put his hand on the aggressor’s shoulder.

    “He ain’t worth the trouble, Mosley. I mean, who’s gonna believe some crazy-ass hobo anyway?”


    John Mosley stood for another moment, staring intently with razor sharp eyes, before finally conceding, placing his pistol back in his coat. He left, and the others followed suit; they disappeared from sight as they passed beyond the hill, never to be seen again.


    And as for Old Roger, he made sure to stay clear from that overpass for the rest of his days.




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    PULLING THE STRINGS

    Part 1: The Arrival

    A Fringe Fan Fiction Series by Omniscient_Jay


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    Wow, that was really great, Jay! You kept me interested the whole time. I definitely can't wait to see what those men are up to. I hope you update soon!
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    Wow, that was really great, Jay! You kept me interested the whole time. I definitely can't wait to see what those men are up to. I hope you update soon!
    Thanks a bunch, AAA!

    If you would be so kind as to give feedback/criticism on my writing (style, flow, etc), I would greatly appreciate it.

    And now a lengthy post detailing various elements of importance...

    Pulling the Strings is a series that will follow multiple storylines in the Fringe universe(s). I'm not going to reveal anything at the moment; the characters and plot will be revealed as I post subsequent chapters. I can only say that the main characters of the show (that is, Olivia, Peter, and Walter) are not the main characters in this story (although as time wears on, you can count on them showing up more often). Also, it will be canon as of the Second Season (or as canon as I can possibly make it).

    I am currently in the process of writing Chapter 4, and will post Chapter 1 after I completed the fourth chapter. That is how I will determine the frequency of installments: I will only post a new chapter once I have finished writing the one I am currently working on.

    I will also be placing some easter eggs in some chapters for your enjoyment.

    I have been working on this project in increments since January; I've only recently finished the general mytharc, because the scope is epic, if I do say so myself. So you'd better like it.

    The first part of the series is titled the Arrival. Based on my current signature, I believe you can guess what the story will be about.

    The first chapter will introduce a new dimension to an well-known element of Fringe. Can YOU guess what it is?

    With that, enjoy Pulling the Strings!
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    Amazing start! Can't wait to see where this is going!

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    Amazing start! Can't wait to see where this is going!
    Thanks, Fen.

    I will probably post the first Chapter some time tomorrow, if all goes well.

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    Chapter 1: Set In Motion


    A dying summer’s breeze shook the trees lining the promenade to and fro, its strident wail haunting the seemingly lifeless grounds of Franklin Park. Few were venturing the walkways on that chill September day, and those who did clung to their coats with squinting eyes as the wind slowly robbed their extremities of sensation. Apart from the occasional passerby, he was left to himself on a bench overlooking the still, sparkling surface of the pond.

    Just the way he liked it.

    The man took another sip of his hot beverage, savoring it as it rolled over his tongue and slid down his throat. This was his favorite area of the park, one that he came to when his schedule would allow it. On that wooden bench, he would come to reflect in solitude while he quietly watched those around him. There was no one to watch that day, however, so he contented himself to feed some small ducklings that were gathered on the path before him, scattering pieces of bread he brought for this very occasion.

    “Aren’t you cold in that fancy suit, mister?”

    The shrill voice awoke him from his stupor. There stood a young girl in a red coat, looking at the man with an inquisitive expression.

    “I am fine,” he replied. “The cold doesn’t bother me much.”

    As he continued to nourish the birds, the girl gazed as they quarrelled amongst each other, greedily gobbling up what they could. The man noticed that she kept eyeing him and his bread, holding her arms behind her back and rocking a little on her feet. He looked at her, and she averted her eyes, realizing her lack of discretion.

    “What is your name, little girl?” he asked.

    “...Cassidy,” she responded timidly.

    “Would you like to feed the ducks, Cassidy?”

    Her eyes lit up, and a small, shy smile snuck its way onto her face. He handed her a loaf which she accepted with great delight, and she began to break it apart, letting the morsels fall to her feet and laughing as the ducklings danced around her yellow boots. Her face beamed with joy, and the man could not help but observe in silent curiosity. He seldom saw children, let alone them playing and enjoying themselves. This embodiment of wonder and innocence fascinated him. She was so alive, so...unique.

    He tried to imagine what it would be like to raise a child.

    “Hey mister,” she asked. “What’s your name?”

    Before he could speak, a woman in a blue parka came to her side, visibly relieved to have found her.

    “Cassidy! How many times have I told you not to go running off like that!” she scolded.

    Disappointment washed over Cassidy’s round little face; her mother’s sudden appearance had frightened her fuzzy companions back into the pond. As the mother berated Cassidy for her disobedience, the suited man turned his attention to the shimmering body of water. The ducklings carved themselves a path through the surface, leaving a trail of ripples in their path. As time passed, they grew wider, disturbing the water’s surface in their wake; the pond never quite seemed to settle back to its once calm state.

    “I’m terribly sorry”, she said, “I hope she didn’t bother you.”

    The wariness in her eyes betrayed her polite, apologetic demeanor.

    “Everything is alright”, he replied.

    Taking her daughter’s hand, they continued down the stone path. He could hear them negotiate about the prospect of an ice cream cone as they slowly disappeared from sight. He observed the interactions between them, and after some thought, he deemed Cassidy’s mother to be a suitable one.

    It’s a shame she is going to die soon, he remarked.

    He took another sip of his concoction, feeling relieved to be left to his thoughts once more. He wished he could come here more often, but his job was a demanding one, and he rarely had the time to rest. That is why he decided to enjoy this rare moment of tranquility as long as he could, even though he knew it wouldn’t last very long.

    No sooner could he complete this train of thought when his phone suddenly vibrated in his coat pocket. He took it out, and read the message on the screen:


    “Activate Correspondence Protocol
    Location Sector Alpha-2 [04.35415/-07.05433/122.36]
    Time at 10:59:59 AM Local
    [Priority code 1618]”


    He froze. He was indeed expecting a message, but not one of this urgency. That priority code was only issued in times of great importance. His mind raced with possible scenarios. But he mastered the anxiety as quickly as it swept over him; there was no time to waste. He swiftly gathered his few belongings into the briefcase at his side, and began walking at a brisk pace alongside the pond. Soon enough, he breached the threshold of the entrance gate, abandoning the serene ambiance of the park to enter a less forgiving Boston.

    The endless flow of traffic matched the hurried rhythm of people roaming the sidewalks. His senses were saturated with the sound of sirens, the smell of smoke, the contrast of colors; it was all so invigorating. And as much as he wanted to stay, he knew that his mission was far more important. With this in mind, he pressed on through the thick brush of Boston’s concrete jungle.

    The gargantuan building which he sought now towered before him. According to the coordinates on his phone, he was to reach the pinnacle of the high-rise. After assessing the situation, he entered the building without any hindrances, and began the lengthy task of conquering the long flight of stairs that lead to the rooftop.

    As his footsteps resounded in the shaft, he wondered what could possibly in store for him. This wasn’t the first time he had dealt with a top-priority event. Even so, he still could not help being slightly worried as to what was to come. He had quite a knack for anticipating the probable outcomes of things, but in these circumstances, all bets were off.

    Things didn’t quite proceed as planned the last time, he remarked.

    The door gave way with a metallic squeak. He was now four hundred feet off the ground; the city of Boston extended beyond sight in all directions. And as he stood on the summit of the Keystone Building, larger structures still loomed in the distance, mighty pillars that held the sky in place. He checked his stopwatch; it was nearing the eleventh hour. There was nothing worth noting anywhere on the roof, and no one else was there besides him. He tried to picture what could happen, but his efforts were vain. Of all the places in Boston, he thought, why made this one so important?

    What was about to happen?

    Only the distilled sounds of the traffic below quelled the silence. As the time approached, he checked his stopwatch once more, watching the hands count down the inevitable.

    ...3...2...1...

    For a moment, nothing happened. Everything appeared to be in place. And yet, he sensed that something had changed. The atmosphere was slightly different than it was a moment ago. A low, nearly imperceptible vibration rang through his body.

    A faint shimmer of light flickered on the horizon. Seeing this, the man summoned a small, rectangular object from his coat pocket. With the press of his fingers, they popped open, revealing a pair of compact binoculars, which he then peered through. In the distance, a small, circular window of sorts was floating in midair, oscillating like the surface of water. The readings on his specs fluctuated wildly as they focused on the strange sight. He scanned it through various filters, analyzed it with various functions and algorithms; it all pointed to the same conclusion.

    It led to another world.

    The window closed, disappearing just as quickly as it came; it was as though it was never there to begin with. In its stead appeared an object, the details of which he could not quite discern. Zooming in, he realized, much to his surprise, that it was something that he would have never expected.

    It was a pigeon.

    Flying in his direction was a bird no different than any other bird in Boston, save that according to his binoculars the pigeon was ever so slightly out of place with its surroundings. There was also something attached to its neck. The object’s grey surface glistened in the pallid sunlight. The avian messenger inched closer with every beat of its wings. In mere moments, it was in sight. He snapped his specs shut, and stretched out his arm; the bird landed on it with grace, wrapping its talons around the polyester sleeve.

    A metallic cylinder hung loosely around the pigeon’s neck, tied with a crimson ribbon. He detached the cylinder, and let the strand of fabric flutter in the morning wind. As soon as he took the object, the bird soared into the distance, becoming but one of the countless indigenous pigeons to daub the Boston skyline.

    The cylinder was surprisingly light, and was completely smooth. As he slid his fingers across its surface, he realized that there was no way of opening it. Engraved on one side, however, he found a message, written in a code which, to outsiders, was impossible to solve, a code which he deciphered with ease.


    “Whether there is a way or not rests with you.”


    He knew those words well; it was something his mentor used to say to him when he was undergoing his formation as an agent. He deduced that the very same man sent the cylinder. After placing the mysterious object in his briefcase, he took out his phone, flipping it open to make a call.

    “I have completed the objective,” he began.

    “Well, what is it? What have you found?”

    An older voice echoed from the other end of the line. Though calm and collected, it brimmed with intelligence and wisdom.

    “I have acquired a metallic cylinder. It was sent from Alpha-1 via...pigeon.”

    There was no reply. After several moments, he continued.

    He sent it.”

    “Of course he sent it,” the other voice said. “He was the one that issued Priority Code 1618 to begin with.”

    The suited man’s brows burrowed, disconcerned. He found the circumstances to be very unusual. A simple phone call or message would have sufficed, he thought; there was no need for all these theatrics. He reasoned that there was surely a sound explanation behind these actions. But what exactly this explanation might be eluded him, no matter how much he tried to rationalize it.

    “What are my instructions?” the suited man asked his superior.

    “Bring the cylinder to the Diner,” the man began, “I will notify the others.”

    A moment of silence ensued, and his superior spoke once more.

    “We are going to Council.”

    The announcement was unsettling. A slight pang of worry swept through his mind. Only once he collected his thoughts was he able to reply.

    “Understood; I will be there soon. September out.”

    A new message then flashed on the screen:


    “Crépuscule Council Summoning
    Location Sector Alpha-2 [0.000/0.000/0.000]
    Time at 12:00:00 PM Local
    [Priority Code 1618]”


    September shut his phone and began to retrace his steps to the streets below. As he descended the interminable flight of stairs, he tried to make sense of it all. They rarely convened for Council, which was even rarer than dealings with high-priority events; he could count on his hands all the Council meetings he had ever participated in. He tried to vanquish the urgency and worry that brewed within him, trying to see the brighter side, as his mentor had taught him. This was surely going to be a relatively simple task, he mused. After all, it was his role to deal with these matters. He was well trained, well equipped, and he had the assistance of his equally qualified colleagues. As he dwelt upon these thoughts, his mind became at ease, and once he exited the building, he was collected once more.

    And yet, as he began his trek down the cold walkways of High Street, he had the sense that things were only going to get more difficult – and more dangerous – from that point forward.



    ********



    So begins the epic saga of Pulling the Strings...

    What did you guys think?

    Did you manage to find the R-Y-B reference?

    In the first chapter, we were introduced to the first storyline, in which we encountered a very familiar face: that of September, one of the mysterious observers.

    We also saw some pretty strange shizzlenit go down...

    -What is the metallic cylinder?
    -Who sent it?
    -What's the deal with the pigeon?
    -What the heck is "Crépuscule" supposed to mean? Is that German or something?

    As the story unfolds, it will become increasingly evident that there is a reason for everything.

    In the next chapter, we will follow September as he attends the Council meeting. Where will it take place? What fate awaits him there?

    Find out in Chapter 2 of Pulling the Strings: The Arrival.

    (And to answer your question, yes, I will be adding a dramatic appendix after every chapter).

    Stay tuned!

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    It's funny, I went to a Franklin Park today!

    I know you asked for constructive criticism, but I really can't find anything that needed it. I love how descriptive you are. I really enjoyed reading the first chapter, and I'll be tuning in for the ones that follow!
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    It's funny, I went to a Franklin Park today!

    I know you asked for constructive criticism, but I really can't find anything that needed it. I love how descriptive you are. I really enjoyed reading the first chapter, and I'll be tuning in for the ones that follow!
    Did you see a girl in a red coat and yellow boots trailing behind a woman with a blue parka?

    I see you are at a loss for words. Don't fear; all I ask is that you enjoy the story.

    But I would like to know... what did you think of my portrayal of September?

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    I have a friend named Cassidy!
    You did a fantastic job writing this chapter! I thought your potrayal of September was really well done. If we ever get a chance to get inside his head in Fringe, this is what it would be like, I'm sure. Now, where's the next chapter?
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